100 word

100 Word Challenge…


…suddenly, darkness enveloped the room…



At my school in my darkness room all by myself

In my school room alone boy he had a dream that he want to go home on the day he went to school so he was very happy when he got there when he walk in

Suddenly he had a noise so he runny back to his mum

But she was kill that why he couldn't go home so he

Went out of bed to go have but he look at his mum

He said his mum was dead but was her but it was her that dead it was the person that was try to kill

His mum so he went to go hud her when a big hud.











Comments

  1. hi everyone

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  2. Terry, do you really think the boy in the story would act like this if his mother was dead? That doesn't make any sense.

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